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In a child's eyes, the world is flat.
And there's a way of knowing.
Whether or not the Cat in the Hat
Has a way of showing.

In a child's eyes, people are kind,
Until the theory is proven wrong.
Evil is something they cannot find,
Because love is never gone.

In a child's eyes, there's no lust here;
For with that would come use.
That's not something a child would fear;
The concept is far too loose.

In a child's eyes, war is a monster;
That hides underneath their bed.
They have no reason to believe it, sir;
Mommy takes the idea right out of their head.

The world is such a simple place,
When seen through the eyes of someone small.
Wouldn't life have so much more grace,
If there was still a child in us all?
©2007-2009 ~blueBlackmorning
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A glimpse inside my mind.

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:iconkidnappedtheif:
the meaning and the diction is Beautiful! You have something very universal here and I like it.

"by george I think I get it!"

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~Swoooook!~
:iconreesemcneese:
I must say, I rather like it!
It rhymes without seeming contrived or unnatural, and overall it rocks in verbiage and language. Props.
:iconzmanzdaonlyman4me:
In love with this poem.

Reminds me of my Zach man.

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"You know that whole Love Thy Neighbor thing? I meant it." - God.
:iconyoucanlickmycat:
Ahah wow. I like this one.

A child's mind is so simple and innocent... But our media is corrupting them at younger and younger ages. It's a shame.

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Tengo una fiesta en mis pantalones. Te invito.
:iconhasrataidenn:
aww...i like this one a lot *cling* i sometimes wish i was still a child and still naive to all the dirt and nastiness of the world. you've captured that feeling beautifully :heart:

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This is my Story.
:iconblueblackmorning:
thank you very much! wow... thank you, really. :hug:

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There are no bad pictures; simply AwKwArD moments captured on film.

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All good beginnings contain the ending.
:iconblueblackmorning:
thank you so much!!! :heart:


and thanks for the fav.

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There are no bad pictures; simply AwKwArD moments captured on film.

:pirate:

All good beginnings contain the ending.
:iconblueblackmorning:
It is a shame... That's why everyone should be childlike.. to keep that from happening... lead by example...


Thanks for the fav!

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There are no bad pictures; simply AwKwArD moments captured on film.

:pirate:

All good beginnings contain the ending.
:iconblueblackmorning:
awww... :3 YAY!!

thanks por la fav.

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There are no bad pictures; simply AwKwArD moments captured on film.

:pirate:

All good beginnings contain the ending.

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